Oh wow... This is as brilliant as it is intimidating! You raised the stakes of debt-settling fanfics.

Your Argus is charming, you should write him more often!

But the best thing is your Rita. I love her in the role of the closeted Ministering Angel. It's a new side to her, very secret but still believable.

I'm really amazed, you came up with that story so quickly and still it has so many nice little touches and details! And all without a beta! You're a star!